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…showed last 75 words of 230 total…confusing to the reader. The last rule that the article breaks is that it generalizes. This article dose break over half of the rules of writing set forth by Orwell, but less than ten percent of the paper contains these errors. With only less than ten percent of the article having problems many readers may think that this is acceptable, but if a reader misunderstands one key point he may not understand the entire article.